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<edit> Corrected the hands a little. Hopefully for the better.</edit>

Something I had on my harddrive for more than a year now. Procrastination, you have found thy master.

The joke is NOT MINE, I just found it so fitting to the Hetalia that I wanted to do this.

Originally it goes like this:

In a train carriage were an Englishman, a Frenchman, a spectacular looking blonde and a frightfully awful looking fat lady. After several minutes of the trip the train happens to pass through a dark tunnel, and the unmistakable sound of a slap is heard. When they leave the tunnel, the Frenchman had a big red slap mark on his cheek. The blonde thought - "That French son of a ***** wanted to touch me and by mistake, he must have put his hand on the fat lady, who in turn must have slapped his face". The fat lady thought - "This dirty old Frenchman laid his hands on the blonde and she smacked him". The Frenchman thought - "That dirty Englishman put his hand on that blonde and by mistake she slapped me". The Englishman thought - "I hope there's another tunnel soon so I can smack that French prat again".

France, England, femFrance and oldfemEngland (yes, that's who she's supposed to be!) belong to Hidekaz Himaruya


Even if this involves a bit too much painting for my liking (the drawings were old. It was painfully obvious) I think I'm getting closer to what I want my 'style' to be.

Constructive Critisism and generally mistakes being pointed out is always, always welcome.
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Critique by ~ShugarMish Oct 3, 2011, 5:53:33 PM
The comic had a suprise begining and end witch keeps the reader in suspense, thats a plus. its always hard to put originality into fan-art, doujinshi, etc. but you hit the nail right on the hammer, you made it creative and well illustrated. you hilighted the characters relations and personalitys very well. I think it might have had more impact if you added maybe a few colours. The style you put them in is really good too~!

i think you should really do some more~!

i liked that you made femengland an old lady~!

over all a really great job~!
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~spongebobdeathnote May 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D lol i love this

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~Chokokyoko Apr 26, 2012
HAHAHAHAHA this is great XD

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*Zieberich May 2, 2012
Glad you liked it!

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~Chokokyoko May 3, 2012
hehe it's the misunderstandings like this that crack me up... :D
And the art is amazing too :D

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~Kochumba Apr 15, 2012  Student Photographer
I already knew the joke so I wasn't suprised by the ending, but I must say it's a great comic! Absolutely wonderful!
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*Zieberich Apr 21, 2012
It's a great joke though, isn't it? :)
Thank you very much!

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~Kochumba Apr 21, 2012  Student Photographer
Indeed, it is! And it do fits Hetaria world xD
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~MoonlightWillow6 Apr 1, 2012   Writer
This was hilarious. I loved the ending (and I could totally see England doing that) :XD:

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*Zieberich Apr 6, 2012
Thank you very, very much! And yes, when I heard the story, it ust /screamed/ Hetalia!England to me. :)

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~JessicaLirio Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was perfect!Really nice job!

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